Wednesday, March 30, 2016

Jeremy and Spence


     Spencer: 16 (older and able to pass for 16 is okay), Caucasian, male. Has a snarky sense of humor. Is best friends with Jeremy and although he can be domineering and manipulative, he does genuinely care for him.


     Jeremy: 16 (older and able to pass for 16 is okay), male, athletic. He's an honest, loyal friend. Has a mild resentment of his very conservative Christian upbringing. Is integrous but doesn't like confrontation and has trouble standing up for himself. Has been best friends with Spencer for about two years. They met when his family starting attending Spence’s church.

Scene 1

Best friends Spence and Jeremy are about to head out on an overnight camping trip. Jeremy's parents, who are currently away, have forbidden him to go unless the boys are accompanied by Ben, Spence's older brother. Jeremy sees Spence bike up to his house, alone, even though he promised Ben would come. 


           EXT. JEREMY’S HOUSE - CONTINUOUS                                 
          Spence skids to a stop.                                          
                                                                           
                              JEREMY                                       
                    Where’s Ben?                                           
                                                                           
                              SPENCE                                       
                    The turd bailed on me at the last                      
                    second. Seriously, this morning he                     
                    just walks out and says he’s doing                     
                    something else. I swear the only                       
                    reason he exists is to piss on my                      
                    life.                                                  
                                                                           
          Jeremy just looks at him in disbelief.                           
                                                                           
          Spence knows he doesn’t buy it.                                  
                                                                           
          Jeremy turns.                                                    
                                                                           
                              SPENCE                                       
                    You freaking infant! We’ve been                        
                    planning to do this for weeks and                      
                    you’re just going to walk out                          
                    because your parents pull something                    
                    at the last minute? Come on! As far                    
                    as they know Ben is going with us                      
                    and that’s all they’re going to                        
                    know unless you tell them. Act like                    
                    a man for once and just do                             
                    something you want to do!                              
                                                                           
          Jeremy steps inside and closes the door.                         
                                                                           


Scene 2
 







While on their camping trip, Spence and Jeremy return to their camp after running into Ben, who apparently came to check up on them.
 Spence and Ben got into an argument after which Spence stormed away.



           EXT. CAMPSITE - DAY                                                                 
          Spence storms into camp with Jeremy trailing behind. Spence      
          furiously paces as Jeremy awkwardly stands by. Spence throws     
          a log and yells.                                                 
                                                                           
                              SPENCE                                       
                    Who does he think he is? I can’t                       
                    even take one little camping trip                      
                    without him screwing it up! Like                       
                    I’m an infant who’s too stupid not                     
                    to kill itself if it isn’t watched                     
                    every second.                                          
                                                                           
                              JEREMY                                       
                    Yeah, it sucks being treated like                      
                    kids all the time.                                     
                                                                           
                              SPENCE                                       
                    Yeah! No kidding! Man, my parents                      
                    telling me what movies I can and                       
                    can’t watch, what games I can’t                        
                    play, who I can hang out with, and                     
                    not only that, but they have the                       
                    nerve to tell me how I should live                     
                    the rest of my life even when I’m                      
                    not living at home! And Ben’s got                      
                    this mission to control my life and                    
                    make sure I’m not doing anything he                    
                    doesn’t like. There’s only so much                     
                    a guy can take, you know?                              
                                                                           
                              JEREMY                                       
                    I know. My parents hardly let me                       
                    hang out with anyone, even from                        
                    youth group. Like any kid who                          
                    wasn’t raised by their standards is                    
                    going to be a bad influence or gay                     
                    or something.                                          
                                                                           
                              SPENCE                                       
                    They think someone in youth group                      
                    is gay?                                                
                                                                           
                              JEREMY                                       
                    My dad does.                                           
                                                                           
          Spence laughs.                                                   
                                                                           
                              SPENCE                                       
                    No way! Who?                                           
                                                                           
                              JEREMY                                       
                    Russ.                                                  
                                                                           
                              SPENCE                                       
                    Why, just because he kind of has a                     
                    lisp?                                                  
                                                                           
          Jeremy nods.                                                     
                                                                           
                              SPENCE                                       
                    I knew your were parents bad,                          
                    but...!                                                
                                                                           
                              JEREMY                                       
                    Honestly, they don’t even really                       
                    like me hanging out with you that                      
                    much.                                                                                                     
                                                                           
                              SPENCE                                       
                    Seriously?                                             
                                                                           
                              JEREMY                                       
                    Yeah.                                                  
                                                                           
                              SPENCE                                       
                    Well screw them! (beat) That’s what                    
                    pisses me off! They think we’re                        
                    incapable of making any decisions                      
                    on our own so they try to control                      
                    everything we do and force us to be                    
                    who they think we should be. Damn                      
                    it! It’s insulting!                                    
                                                                           
                              JEREMY                                       
                    At dinner last night, in front                         
                    of everyone, my dad gives me like                      
                    this twenty minute prepared speech                     
                    about how to be safe camping and                       
                    how I shouldn’t let any bad habits                     
                    you may have rub off and I should                      
                    try to steer our conversations                         
                    toward God. He even gave me a list                     
                    of Bible verses to bring up for                        
                    discussion since we wouldn’t be at                     
                    church. Like I’m going to hell if                      
                    I’m not thinking and talking about                     
                    the Bible 24/7. And this is all                        
                    right before he drops the news                         
                    about Ben needing to come along.                       
                                                                           
                              SPENCE                                       
                    Who needs it, man? I’d move out                        
                    right now but they wouldn’t let me.                    
                    And I’m pretty sure I can’t get                        
                    emancipated, I checked. So I figure                    
                    I’ll just take advantage of the                        
                    free rent and food and when I’m                        
                    eighteen I’m gone without so much                      
                    as a goodbye.                                          
                                                                           
                              JEREMY                                       
                    I hear that.                                           
                                                                            

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