Wednesday, March 30, 2016

Trent 

Scene 2

Detective Trent Baker and his partner of two years Detective Ben Taylor (he's mid-20's) are staking out the house of a suspected murder.


           INT. TRENT’S CAR - NIGHT                                              
                                                                           
                              BEN                                          
                    I think I like stake outs.                             
                                                                           
                              TRENT                                        
                    Wait till you’ve done more of them.                                                                     
                              
                              BEN 
                    How do you get through them?     

                                                                           
                              TRENT                                        
                    I usually bring along a book or                        
                    two.                                                   
                              BEN                                          
                    What do you like to read?                              
                                                                           
                              TRENT                                        
                    Glove box.                                             
                                                                           
          Ben opens it and pulls out a book.                               
                                                                           
                              BEN                                          
                    "True Paranormal Encounters". Huh.                     
                    I didn’t think you were the type.                      
                                                                           
          Trent grabs it and chucks it in the back.                        
                                                                           
                              BEN                                          
                    Okay.                                                  
                                                                           
          He looks back at Miles’ file. Grimaces.                          
                                                                           
                              BEN                                          
                    Simon Miles. Man, how does a kid                       
                    get like that? I mean, you don’t                       
                    just decide one day that you’re                        
                    going to cut up your parents with a                    
                    kitchen knife, you know? And then                      
                    he claims he was possessed? What                       
                    had to happen to him?                                  
                                                                           
                              TRENT                                        
                    It wasn’t something that just                          
                    happened, it was a lot of things.                      
                    Years of dysfunction and abuse,                        
                    problems that never got addressed                      
                    that built up until he just                            
                    snapped. If you know something is                      
                    wrong and you continue doing it,                       
                    you don’t get to decide where it                       
                    ends.                                                  
                                                                           
          Ben is a little surprised.                                       
                                                                           
                              BEN                                          
                    You sure you don’t believe he was                      
                    possessed?                                             
                                                                           
          Trent gives him look.                                                                                                   
                                                                           
                              TRENT                                        
                    We all have a sense of right and                       
                    wrong. But people have an                              
                    astounding capacity for                                
                    justification and self-deception.                      
                    They repress their God-given                           
                    conscience and we get a world like                     
                    we have today. People convince                         
                    themselves they can sin without                        
                    consequence or that there is no                        
                    sin. Or they don’t care one way or                     
                    the other and end up butchering                        
                    their parents with a kitchen knife.                    
                                                                           
                              BEN                                          
                    That’s very philosophical of you. I                    
                    thought I was the religious one.                       
                                                                           
                              TRENT                                        
                    I’m not stupid enough to not                           
                    believe in a God. People just don’t                    
                    want to believe in one because that                    
                    might mean they can’t do what they                     
                    want. In the case of Miles, I                          
                    believe he’d had it with his                           
                    parents and decided to kill them                       
                    and then claimed to be possessed so                    
                    he would get off on an insanity                        
                    plea.                                                  
                                                                           
                              BEN                                          
                    You’re telling me a kid who does                       
                    something like that doesn’t have a                     
                    serious mental problem?                                
                                                                           
          Trent is quiet for a moment.                                     
                                                                           
                              TRENT                                        
                    When I was a rookie back in Idaho,                     
                    there was a guy I knew named                           
                    Terique. Really nice guy, had a                        
                    wife, Sherry, and two kids. Didn’t                     
                    know him all that well, just seen                      
                    him a few times when I was hanging                     
                    out at the bar with the guys. One                      
                    day we get this call for a domestic                    
                    disturbance. I was surprised when                      
                    Terique answered the door. Whatever                    
                    it was, it was over by the time we                     
                    got there. He answered the door.                       
                    Said he didn’t know why the                            
                    neighbours called us. The kids had                     
                    just been playing around and                                                                                                                                                                                                              
                    knocked over a vase. He invited us                     
                    over for a barbecue a couple days                      
                    later. He said it was an apology                       
                    for the waste of our time. Looking                     
                    back, things were a little                             
                    different with them that day but I                     
                    didn’t notice at the time. (beat)                      
                    The next week we got another call.                     
                    As I pulled onto their block, I                        
                    passed Sherry almost running on the                    
                    sidewalk, crying. Terique said it                      
                    wasn’t anything and closed the                         
                    door. I caught up with Sherry and                      
                    she said they just had a fight and                     
                    I shouldn’t worry. (beat) A couple                     
                    days later another call came in.                       
                    Someone else took the call but I                       
                    found out that they got there right                    
                    after the call was made and Sherry                     
                    answered door. Her nose was                            
                    bleeding and her face was starting                     
                    to swell. They hauled him down to                      
                    the station for 24 hours and fined                     
                    him. I showed up at his house that                     
                    night and... let him know what                         
                    would happen if he touched her                         
                    again. (beat) Three days later we                      
                    got a report of gunshots at his                        
                    house. Me and three other cars                         
                    showed up at the same time but I                       
                    kicked the door in. Sherry was in                      
                    the kitchen. She had been knocked                      
                    out of her chair by the shotgun                        
                    blast that had blown her head                          
                    apart. The kids... The kids were in                    
                    the corner. The boy shielded his                       
                    sister but it was pointless. The                       
                    first shot killed him and knocked                      
                    him on top of her. Terique finished                    
                    her off point blank. Just as we                        
                    started looking for him he walks in                    
                    the back door covered in blood and                     
                    brain matter and acting like                           
                    nothing happened. (beat) I put a                       
                    bullet through his eye.                                
                                                                           
                              BEN                                          
                    He came at you with the shotgun?                       
                                                                           
          Beat.                                                                                                            
                                                                           
                              TRENT                                        
                    Yes.

Ben looks over at him. From Trent's tone it's apparent that no, Terique did not. 

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